First draft of story: Many people in Crit Group 1 think the protagonist is too slow figuring out what's going on.
Second draft of story, in which the protagonist figures things out at the point suggested in previous crits: Many people in Crit Group 2 think the protagonist figures things out far too quickly.
Reason #2
Significant number of crits: strong setting, lots of great detail throughout
Equally significant number of crits: generic or no sense of setting, needs more detail
Reason #3
Don't even get me started on the lack of consensus on whether the title is good or makes absolutely no sense.
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